Dear
Grade Fives!
Today: Last week you recorded notes answering the question: How are the camel humps used and how do they work? You edited your notes and we edited them as a class.
*Please post your newly edited notes (e.g. the ones we discussed in class).
Using these edited notes, I would like you to answer the question in a single, complete paragraph.
*Please post your newly edited notes (e.g. the ones we discussed in class).
Using these edited notes, I would like you to answer the question in a single, complete paragraph.
Tomorrow, you will
edit your response, listen to it, and then have a peer edit it as well. Please
note that the checklist is a bit longer. You will also be checking that you
have used proper paragraph conventions. When you have made all of your
corrections, you will copy your blog and post it as usual. You may want to have
two windows open side-by-side, one with the blog letter and one being your word
document.
Just
a reminder that a paragraph contains:
a)
topic (promise) sentence: what
you promise to tell the reader about
b) at least three support sentences (at
least): specific examples or details about your topic
c) concluding sentence: where
you remind the reader what you promised to tell the reader
Bactrian camels
ReplyDeleteHere are some facts about the Bactrian camels. Bactrian camels have two humps and store fat in their humps. When the humps loose all there fat they become soft and flappy. In Bactrian camel’s humps they can store up to eighty pounds of fat. Arabian camels only have one hump which is different from the Bactrian camels because of there two humps. The humps store fat which helps them keep cool in the hot dessert weather. These are the facts that I learned about the Bactrian camels humps.
Bactrian Camel Humps
ReplyDeleteI have been learning about the Bactrian camel humps. Bactrian camels have two humps not just one like the Arabian camel has. The camel stores fat in their humps but if there is no fat in the humps the humps get flabby and soft. The Bactrian camel`s humps keeps the camel cool because they get really hot in the desert. I have been learning about the Bactrian camel`s humps
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In this paragraph I will be talking about Bactrian camels. Bactrian camels have two humps. These humps store fat. There humps have pockets for lots of things like fresh water storage. Bactrian camels use stored fat as energy when far away from food or water. In the winter plants yield enough moisture to sustain a camel and there humps. The camels can hold there fat storage many weeks. Bactrian camels can hold up to eighty pounds of fat. The humps of Bactrian camels get soft and flabby when fat storage gets low. These are notes I found out about Bactrian camels. Thank you for listening
Bactrian camels
ReplyDeleteIn this paragraph I will be talking about the Bactrian camels. The camels have two humps. They store the fat in there humps. They get soft and flappy when they are out of fat. They can save water for a long time of traveling. In the humps there are pockets so the camel can holed the water and fat. They have fresh water storage. They can store eighty kg of fat in one hump. That is what I know about the Bactrian camels.
Blog Response
ReplyDeleteHere is a paragraph about Bactrian camel humps.
Camels store fat in there humps. Bactria camels have two humps Bactrian camels use there fat when they can’t get food or water. The fat is stored in there humps so they don’t get to hot. The humps get flabby when the fat runs out. The humps fat is also used for energy. They can store eighty pounds of fat in their humps. Here’s a paragraph about Bactrian camels humps.
Bactrian Camels Humps
ReplyDeleteI have been learning about Bactrian camel’s humps. Bactrian camels have two humps. They store fat, food, and water in their humps. When the fat source is low the humps get soft and flabby. Bactrian camels can store eighty pounds of fat in their humps. The humps are also used to keep the camels cool in the hot desert. These are some facts that I learned about Bactrian camel`s humps.
Bactrian camels
ReplyDeleteIn this paragraph I will be talking about Bactrian camels. Also the Bactrian camels have two humps. Also they store fat in there humps. Also there humps are flabby and soft. There humps hold (80kg). In this paragraph I will be learning about Bactrian camels.
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Here are some of the things that I have learnt. Bactrian camels have two humps some camels have one. There humps get soft flabby when low fat and water. They only store fat in humps. These are some of my notes.
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In this paragraph I will be talking about Bactrian camels. Bactrian camels have two humps on there back. There humps store fat when there far away from food and water. The fat gives them energy. When the humps run out of fat the humps go soft and flabby. The humps are also a freshwater source. There humps hold water for many weeks .This paragraph is about Bactrian camels humps.
Bactrian Camels’ Humps
ReplyDeleteI have been learning about Bactrian camels’ humps. Bactrian camels’ have two humps were they store their fat. Camels can store 80 lbs. (36 kg) of fat. Their humps get soft and flabby when their stores run out. Their fat is stored only in their humps.
Camels Feb 11
ReplyDeleteI took notes on camels humps . Camels store food and water in their humps. The humps get flappy when the fat goes away. Humps store fat and they weigh 80 pounds. I took notes on camels humps.
Bactrian camels
ReplyDeleteThe Bactrian camels have two humps on its back. The humps store fat. The humps get soft and flabby when fat storage runs out. The water goes to the humps to be stored. The Bactrian camels have two humps.
Bactrian camels
ReplyDeleteLast week I did notes on the Bactrian camels. The Bactrian camels two humps. They store fat in there humps. There humps always gets soft and flabby. Last week I did notes on the amazing Bactrian camels.
How does a Bactrian camel humps work
ReplyDeleteI had to learn about the humps of the Bactrian camel. I learn that these camels have two humps and in the humps they store fat. Bactrian camels use their fat as energy and water so they can endure long distance trips with no water. I also learned that these camels drink up to 30 gallons of water in 13 min and when they drink the water goes in their humps. I learned all these things about the humps of the Bactrian camel.
Blog response
ReplyDeleteThis is what I learned about the camel’s humps. I learned that they have two humps. I also learned that they store fat and water in them. They can store eighty pounds of fat in them. I learned that they can go along time without water. That is what I learned about the camel’s humps.
Camel’s humps do really cool jobs. Camels store fat in there humps for when they go on a long journey. They can go several weeks without water. Their humps get sort of flabby when their fat runs out. Camel’s humps do really cool jobs .
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